Name: Thistlestorm Gender: Tom Rank: Warrior Clan: Snow Appearance: White tom with black spots and amber eyes History: *normal clan life* Personality: A sweet loving tom who likes to hang with friends,work for his clan and just have fun! -Family- Dead -Parents- Dead -Siblings- none -Mate- None yet (looking) -Kits- None yet
Relation Ships
acquaintances Buddies Friend Good friend Best Friends Attraction Crush More than a crush Love Family Dislike Hate serious problem with lust Mixed feelings
/ Thunder- S-She is an...amazing,beautiful cat.I met her walking around.W-W both get red around each other...I-i just feel.... -Its now official.I like this cat A LOT!She feels the same way,I know.I just hope.....we can be...more?
Ok, if you tell me you're 6 years-old, then I'll tell you it's "awesome" and hang it on the fridge.
If you're 12 or older, then:
1.-This is a quick doodle lacking creativity, effort, technique, vision, consistency, and whatever else is necessary for this to qualify as a "work of ART".
2.-First of all, quit digital tools. You can't even use them. Look for a competent instructor, and start taking actual art classes. I refer to realism, anatomy, perspective, etc. Not "emotional" paint-splats on a wall junk.
3.-This is a character sheet. It means it's supposed to be a reference for future works featuring it. It's meant to help you have a quick idea of how is this character supposed to act, react, behave, etc. It's not necessarily a plaything.
All-in-all, you better begin to learn how to draw. Things like this being publicly buttkissed on a site dedicated to "ART", is a shame for the trade.
Also, I didn't want to grant a single start to this, but the system forced me to do so. This can't be rated. It's has nothing worth to show.
Well, if you would like help, I'll give it to you. I can't really see the face, it's far too smudged up. The hind legs are a little pudgy and don't really shape like a cats. The eyes are cute, but if you're looking for realism or something like that, try to make them more round and keep the pupils INSIDE
The lines are real smudgy and the spots are just at random and I don't think that would set on a cat correctly.
If you want to improve anatomy, keep practicing you have a lot of work to do on that. I do like this, it's really, really cute, but if you've requested a critique on this, then here it is.
I hope I've helped, keep drawing, I'm sure you'll be great someday <3
I'Im sorry. I have no idea where to START critiquing this. The anatomy is atrocious, even if it is a cartoon. The colors contrast GREATLY. I can't even make out the mouth of the character. The spots are disorienting, it's all just so horribly done. Try looking up the breed of cat you are trying to make (which to me looks like an Egyptian Mau). That's all I can tell you. Next time you do artwork for this character, at least try. *-*
I am saying the same thing about this one!!!! i promise i have changed my style [link][link] i really do hate this picture and i am planning ti redo it when i have the time
I was also wondering about this whole clan rp stuff. I have recently read 5 of the books, the first oens to exist, and want to make an OC to roleplay with...
Is there a group? A certain test to choose your clan? And can you make your own clans like how you used snowclan?
If you're 12 or older, then:
1.-This is a quick doodle lacking creativity, effort, technique, vision, consistency, and whatever else is necessary for this to qualify as a "work of ART".
2.-First of all, quit digital tools. You can't even use them. Look for a competent instructor, and start taking actual art classes. I refer to realism, anatomy, perspective, etc. Not "emotional" paint-splats on a wall junk.
3.-This is a character sheet. It means it's supposed to be a reference for future works featuring it. It's meant to help you have a quick idea of how is this character supposed to act, react, behave, etc. It's not necessarily a plaything.
All-in-all, you better begin to learn how to draw. Things like this being publicly buttkissed on a site dedicated to "ART", is a shame for the trade.
Also, I didn't want to grant a single start to this, but the system forced me to do so. This can't be rated. It's has nothing worth to show.
The lines are real smudgy and the spots are just at random and I don't think that would set on a cat correctly.
If you want to improve anatomy, keep practicing you have a lot of work to do on that. I do like this, it's really, really cute, but if you've requested a critique on this, then here it is.
I hope I've helped, keep drawing, I'm sure you'll be great someday <3
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